It is about that time of year when our Capstone projects have been finished and have been handed in to get that grade that could make or break our semester. Some people had a very calm and stress free time while working on their project but others like myself had many complications. The process of writing a story is no joke and i will now appreciate the works of literature much more than I did before.
At first I came up with the idea to follow the cliche "chick flick" love story and base my story of Nicholas Sparks' The Notebook. I wrote about a beautiful young white girl who was of the upper class and had everything you could imagine, but she was in love with a handsome young black man who was of the lower class and worked very hard to help his family make ends meet. Like the notebook it was a constant struggle for the young girl to get her parents to accept her wishes. My story was based in the 1950's the time of the powerful civil rights movement.
After I had started to write that story i realized it was going to be very difficult and i changed it up. I decided to write about a young girl who lived with her parents and traveled to Georgia every summer with them. Everything was going great until one day the mother suddenly collapsed while they were out to eat and it turns out she had cancer. This was a devastating experience because the father had grown up with his wife, someone he had learned to love with every fiber of his body.
I had finally finished that story but i wasn't happy with the result. I then decided to ditch the love story concept and write a story from the guidelines from my favorite show The Following. I wrote about Joe Carroll's theories of being a serial killer and his obsession with women. I believed this turned out to be a very good example of my work, but it wasn't up to par of the directions that were given to us. I needed to add a climax and solution to the many obstacles that would soon arouse.
Finally i came up with my final product. I used some of the same wording and ideas from my previous story but there were also many changes. I wrote from the point of view from a serial killer and his constant struggle with not only the people around him but with his own mental issues. The ending is one no one would ever expect. I won't give away too much, but I hope you enjoy hearing about the rest of my story during my presentation!
Monday, March 24, 2014
Wednesday, March 19, 2014
Presentation Self-Evaluation
Well this may have been one of the most nerve wracking but interesting things I have ever done in English Class. When I heard that we were going to be graded on the number of times we mention words like um and other fillers or even have too long of a pause in between thoughts I didn't think that it would be difficult to overcome, but I was actually very wrong. I talk too people all day long, but I never take into consideration how bad of habits I have and it was very obvious in this exercise.
I feel that I did prepare myself with the topic that I talked about, but I feel I didn't prepare myself enough with how long or exact words I was saying. I had to look down at the paper a few times and I feel that took away from my presentation. I also felt that I could have improved my body language very drastically. I stood in one spot for the entire presentation and if I were part of the audience that would of lost my attention. Standing in one position allowed for myself to seem scared, and fearful of doing something wrong. I've learned that the more nervous you are, the worse your execution will be. Whether I was nervous or not I needed to be more confident in myself and the message I was portraying.
Adding on to my nervousness, it also effected my voice and diction. After watching myself speak I also feel as though I spoke too fast . In order for my message to be sold and have an impact on the audience, I needed to emphasize my words more and show more interest in what I am speaking out. The more interest I show the more interest my audience will show as well.
I talked about yoga pants in my presentation, therefore I needed to add in the different styles and patterns that are found on these pants. I had it written on my paper but due to my eagerness to just be done with the task, the overall details slipped my mind. This could of caused many problems. Without these specific descriptions, there was a gap that the audience may have had trouble filling and being able to picture what I was trying to portray.
I feel that I did prepare myself with the topic that I talked about, but I feel I didn't prepare myself enough with how long or exact words I was saying. I had to look down at the paper a few times and I feel that took away from my presentation. I also felt that I could have improved my body language very drastically. I stood in one spot for the entire presentation and if I were part of the audience that would of lost my attention. Standing in one position allowed for myself to seem scared, and fearful of doing something wrong. I've learned that the more nervous you are, the worse your execution will be. Whether I was nervous or not I needed to be more confident in myself and the message I was portraying.
Adding on to my nervousness, it also effected my voice and diction. After watching myself speak I also feel as though I spoke too fast . In order for my message to be sold and have an impact on the audience, I needed to emphasize my words more and show more interest in what I am speaking out. The more interest I show the more interest my audience will show as well.
I talked about yoga pants in my presentation, therefore I needed to add in the different styles and patterns that are found on these pants. I had it written on my paper but due to my eagerness to just be done with the task, the overall details slipped my mind. This could of caused many problems. Without these specific descriptions, there was a gap that the audience may have had trouble filling and being able to picture what I was trying to portray.
Tuesday, March 11, 2014
Promposals
Now you may be thinking that prom isn’t that important and shouldn’t
draw such great attention, but it has evolved into one of the most important
nights of someone’s high school career. The better the "Promposal" the more “popular”
you will become.
Now you may be thinking what is a "Promposal"? A "Promposal is the
way someone asks someone else to spend the night with on the expensive, elegant
night of prom. This establishes that this special someone is your date and can’t
be taken by anyone else.
In earlier years the way you asked someone to
prom was simple, all you said was “hey would like to go to prom with me? And then
they would answer yes or no. But now that would be looked at as lame, or heartless.
As years have passed the “Promposal” phenomenon has been correlated with many
extravagant ideas. Some involve huge teddy bears and balloons; others include
candy and big signs. This process not only allows for an abundance of
creativity but also the willingness to be confident in asking the person and
hoping they will accept. The biggest controversy about this new revolution is
why or how it became such a popular demand all across schools in the United
States.
There could be
many solutions to this issue. A huge part could come from the “chick flick”
genre that has become popular among this same group of people. Nicholas Sparks
and other romantic authors have created an image that guys need to sweep a girl
off her feet and make her feel as if she is the most perfect girl in the world.
In correlation to “promposals” now a guy feels that with any situation
involving gaining interest from a girl they need to be over the top and cheesy
in order to gain her approval. Another solution could also be that the level of
creativity of teenagers has risen and their drive to become the most popular
or known kid in school has also increased drastically. High school is all about
fitting in and staying friends with the “coolest” people, so why not “wow” the
school with the best “promposal” around?
After the duty is
done and the pair is ready to spend their time together on this one
spectacular night, it almost becomes as if it is a story. Each “promposal” is
like a chapter and as more and more pairs are confirmed it becomes a long,
intricate book. The best “promposals” are talked about for years and years in
which allows for each future generation to see what is in store at this specific
time of year for all high schoolers. The longer this phenomenon occurs, the more stories we will have
and the more interesting prom will become.
How would you want to be asked to prom?
Tuesday, February 25, 2014
Why We Expect the "Prince Charming" Effect
Being a teenager, realize a lot of
things. At school your teacher may be a
great person but they never explain the lesson well enough, or you get to
chuckle with your best friend about what the new kid is wearing, or even
realize who is good at sports and who thinks they are “good” at sports. One
most prominent idea that has prospered though among young adults is
relationships and what is expected of them.
No matter If you
are scrolling through Facebook, Twitter, Instagram, or any other social media
site there is always different posts about a girl wanting a unexpected visit
from their lover, and not only to come see her, but to also bring a beautiful
bouquet of flowers. Most recently we also see a girl complaining that her
boyfriend better get her the newest Pandora bracelet or Michael Kors bag. We also
see girls complaining that their boyfriend is talking to another girl, and they
become jealous wanting nothing more than to make the other girl disappear from
the face of the earth. But when it comes
to the feelings and emotions of the guy in the relationship, in most cases, he
has become accustom to beckoning to every order of his partner and will do
anything to make her happy, even if it means sacrificing something else in his
life. This may seem cruel and inappropriate but it has become a norm in teenage
relationships and will continue for many generations.
The biggest culprit
for this particular way of thinking is the prince charming effect. From the
time that we are little we fill our minds with movies of Disney princesses and
other stories that allow for a lovely lady to be swept of her feet by a
handsome, strong man and in results they live happily ever after without any complications
impeding on her life any longer. We see this when Prince Charming takes
Cinderella away from her duties of being the maid of the house, and she then was
flourished with extravagant clothes and a beautiful carriage to escort her
around. Or in romantic novel the Notebook, when Ally once thought she
was trapped in a relationship with a man of her caliber, but realizes she loves
Noah, the lower class boy and he fights for her love no matter what, showering
her with love notes for a year and constantly reminding her of her beauty, and in
the end they rekindle their relationship and die in each other’s arms. These
are just two examples in which were made in a few decades of each other, and throughout
each story the same theme is being reiterated, in which is that a girl deserves
everything and should be given and shown whatever it takes for her to realize
her value and true beauty.
Now not every relationship may be like this, but I guarantee
the majority of relationships are. This
just shows how story can allow for such a controversial topic to become a norm
in historical and modern society. Yes, girls may complain a lot and may seem
full of themselves, but in my opinion we can only blame the authors, writers
and directors of these powerful stories. These types of prince charming stories
have been passed down from generation to generation and have influenced the mind of young women
greatly and have served as an example as to how all men should treat their
lady. All in all, I do feel bad for the men involved in these relationships but
this way of life will not change unless the plot line of our most popular types
of stories are changed into something in which shows that men and women have established
equality in a relationship.
Sunday, February 9, 2014
Quotes
I was having trouble thinking of a topic for this week's blog post and then all of a sudden it dawned on me, Quotes! I was looking around my house and I couldn't believe how many signs we have each with a different quote on them. I live in a old Victorian house therefore the signs are as an antique, keeping with the old fashioned style.
The quotes on the signs vary in length. Some of them are "Shoot for the moon, even if you miss you will land among the stars" or "Don't be too busy making a living that you forget to make a life" or "Don't believe in miracles depend on them". They each have a different meaning and give you a little sense of inspiration before you leave for school, work, or any outing that could be stressful.
Although I do like the quotes I mentioned, my all time favorite quote that is found in my house is "life isn't measured by the number of breaths we take but by the number of moments that take our breath away". I saw this quote for the first time a couple of years ago and it has stuck with me. We are always told that life is too short, and honestly that is the truth. Life shouldn't just be about existing. It should be about having great moments and being able to remember them for the rest of your life. It could be your first time riding a bike without training wheels, losing your first tooth, or the way a boy asks you to prom, or the feeling you get after winning the championship game, or even just the girls nights you have with tons of junk food and sappy love movies with the people who are always by your side. These are just a few examples that could make life just a little more exciting.
Yes, there is a time and place for everything. Sometimes you just need to be serious and follow the routine of going to work or school and getting done the necessary tasks but do not let life be all about a strict schedule. Let loose for a while and you could be surprised at what amazing things could happen.
Now that I have told you about my favorite quote, what's yours?
The quotes on the signs vary in length. Some of them are "Shoot for the moon, even if you miss you will land among the stars" or "Don't be too busy making a living that you forget to make a life" or "Don't believe in miracles depend on them". They each have a different meaning and give you a little sense of inspiration before you leave for school, work, or any outing that could be stressful.
Although I do like the quotes I mentioned, my all time favorite quote that is found in my house is "life isn't measured by the number of breaths we take but by the number of moments that take our breath away". I saw this quote for the first time a couple of years ago and it has stuck with me. We are always told that life is too short, and honestly that is the truth. Life shouldn't just be about existing. It should be about having great moments and being able to remember them for the rest of your life. It could be your first time riding a bike without training wheels, losing your first tooth, or the way a boy asks you to prom, or the feeling you get after winning the championship game, or even just the girls nights you have with tons of junk food and sappy love movies with the people who are always by your side. These are just a few examples that could make life just a little more exciting.
Yes, there is a time and place for everything. Sometimes you just need to be serious and follow the routine of going to work or school and getting done the necessary tasks but do not let life be all about a strict schedule. Let loose for a while and you could be surprised at what amazing things could happen.
Now that I have told you about my favorite quote, what's yours?
Saturday, January 25, 2014
Reading While Exercising
After reading this title you may be a little confused, and wonder how it is possible. But it is indeed possible, and one of the greatest "multitasking" situations you can put yourself into.
Being an athlete isn't always easy.. you have to worry about staying in shape, impressing the coaches, performing well on and off the field and most importantly being someone who can contribute and be successful in every way possible. When it comes to being the best you can be, it not only means putting the work in during the practice or game but also on your own time, when the coach isn't there to watch your every move. This may be hard or easy for some, depending on the person you are and how dedicated you make yourself. Another factor that plays a part in this process is weather. It may be beautiful one day therefore you can take that long run, or play in that pick up basketball game down the street. Other days it may not be as nice out though and working out needs to be done with other solutions. Luckily for me I have an exercise bike down my basement and when those clouds don't look too promising or it decides to snow 8 inches, i can put on some sneakers and ride the bike as long as my legs and heart desire.
Now you still may be wondering how does this still have anything to do with literature, language or any other aspect of English.. Well the truth is when i ride the exercise bike, i also read a book. When i first heard that my dad multitasks with a book and the bike, i thought he was crazy. Then i decided to try it myself and i couldn't be happier I did. When i read that book, my mind is in another world. I get so wrapped in to the characters lives and the setting that i forget what else I'm doing. My adrenaline is pumping and i continue to go through page by page of usually a sappy love story, but one that i wish i could make a reality. I am currently reading the Glass Castle, in which is a novel about a family who travels like gypsies around the United States trying to stay away from the federal agents and surpass the consequences of past due bills and unpaid taxes. They are barely making ends meet and with 4 kids and 2 adults, constantly scrounging up any food or money they can find to survive. Although I am only one of many that is reading this book, and I'm sure many would think I'm crazy, I still can't help but feel sympathy for the characters wishing i could do something about it.
This shows that stories really do have an impact on people's lives, especially mine. Reading is one of my favorite things to do and now that I can do while also doing another thing I love, makes it even 10x greater. Every book I read, I get more and more into it and have to force myself to put it down, in which also allows my work out to go longer and my body to feel more in shape! I hope everyone else in life can find something, or two that they enjoy as much as I do reading and exercising and do it as much as they desire. I mean who wouldn't want to be wrapped up in a romantic, family, whirlwind love story and burn some unnecessary calories while your at it?
Being an athlete isn't always easy.. you have to worry about staying in shape, impressing the coaches, performing well on and off the field and most importantly being someone who can contribute and be successful in every way possible. When it comes to being the best you can be, it not only means putting the work in during the practice or game but also on your own time, when the coach isn't there to watch your every move. This may be hard or easy for some, depending on the person you are and how dedicated you make yourself. Another factor that plays a part in this process is weather. It may be beautiful one day therefore you can take that long run, or play in that pick up basketball game down the street. Other days it may not be as nice out though and working out needs to be done with other solutions. Luckily for me I have an exercise bike down my basement and when those clouds don't look too promising or it decides to snow 8 inches, i can put on some sneakers and ride the bike as long as my legs and heart desire.
Now you still may be wondering how does this still have anything to do with literature, language or any other aspect of English.. Well the truth is when i ride the exercise bike, i also read a book. When i first heard that my dad multitasks with a book and the bike, i thought he was crazy. Then i decided to try it myself and i couldn't be happier I did. When i read that book, my mind is in another world. I get so wrapped in to the characters lives and the setting that i forget what else I'm doing. My adrenaline is pumping and i continue to go through page by page of usually a sappy love story, but one that i wish i could make a reality. I am currently reading the Glass Castle, in which is a novel about a family who travels like gypsies around the United States trying to stay away from the federal agents and surpass the consequences of past due bills and unpaid taxes. They are barely making ends meet and with 4 kids and 2 adults, constantly scrounging up any food or money they can find to survive. Although I am only one of many that is reading this book, and I'm sure many would think I'm crazy, I still can't help but feel sympathy for the characters wishing i could do something about it.
This shows that stories really do have an impact on people's lives, especially mine. Reading is one of my favorite things to do and now that I can do while also doing another thing I love, makes it even 10x greater. Every book I read, I get more and more into it and have to force myself to put it down, in which also allows my work out to go longer and my body to feel more in shape! I hope everyone else in life can find something, or two that they enjoy as much as I do reading and exercising and do it as much as they desire. I mean who wouldn't want to be wrapped up in a romantic, family, whirlwind love story and burn some unnecessary calories while your at it?
Thursday, January 9, 2014
To Be Or Not to Be
To be or not to be…This is a line from the famous story
“Hamlet” by the one and only Shakespeare. For most people this brings joy and
most of all, their inner nerd comes out, but for me I couldn’t be more
miserable. I think about that famous line and its literal meaning in which is
to live or not to live and when Shakespeare comes to mind, I would choose not
to live. I understand that Shakespeare was one of the greatest writers to ever
walk this earth, and his writing is filled with scholarly motives and themes,
but to me it couldn’t be more difficult or boring to read. We are in the 21st
century, I am not worried about men who wore skirts, and rode horses and had
obnoxiously long hair, or about women who constantly wore dresses and crowns
and married there uncles or brother in laws, like students would be during this
point in time.
This also
brings about the aspect of poetry. Every one of Shakespeare's writings is in
poetic form, and it just makes the story drag on. First you have to worry about
the iambic pentameter and syllables and then come grammar, spelling, and best
of all, big words that only higher level thinkers would be able to define. Yes,
I am in AP English and I should be enlightened by this “brilliance” of writing,
but I don’t find it anymore relevant than the fly buzzing around the room.
What I like to read is the more modern
books like the one we started recently called “The Stranger”. It is about a boy
who has lost his mother and is kind of alone in the world. He has a very
passive and somber tone about him, in which is also like many characters in Shakespeare
work, including Hamlet himself, but the recent story of the boy Meursault is
far more interesting and worthwhile. It is told in plain, modern English in a
style that everyone could relate to. The author of the book Albert Camus establishes
the novel with a narrator, who was made like a realistic every day person that
says what is on his mind, and it is things that me and everyone else reading can
understand and have comparable feelings with. No this book isn’t as “nerdy” as Shakespearean work but it is still has great scholarly merit and shouldn’t be taken for
granted when it comes to reading in a higher level English class..” Other books
like this including To Kill a Mockingbird and Angela’s Ashes (When reading
these types of books I am more likely to think “to be” instead of “not to be),
should be looked at more closely rather than historical poems of stories about
times that haven’t been apart of society in hundreds of years.
Friday, December 27, 2013
2013: The Year of Miley Cyrus
Well if you haven’t realized already, I
am a HUGE fan of Miley Cyrus. I don’t just like her because she’s had the
chance to twerk on stage with Robin Thicke, or because she got to date Liam
Hiemsworth, or even cause she has a lot of money. I like her because she’s her,
and she won’t let anyone tell her differently.
Ever
since she was a little girl she loved acting and singing. I mean hey who wouldn’t
be talented with these skills when you’re the daughter of Billy Rae Cyrus? She
was always the girl who everyone looked at watched with amazement. Her smile
lit up a room and her talents kept their attention. She always did what felt
right to her, therefore she changed her birth name from Destiny Hope Cyrus to
Miley Ray Cyrus. It first started as a nickname of “smiley miley” but then it was
decided that she would just go by Miley. This was impressive to me because she
did what she wanted to do and didn’t let anyone stop her even at an early age.
Her confidence began to grow as she was
the big hit of Disney Channel, the girl with double identities. By day, she was
Miley, the sun loving, teenage California beach girl who loved to hang out with
friends and have a good time. By night, she was a sensational pop star named
Hannah Montana, who drew in many screaming young girls and tunes that would
never leave your mind. The way she interacted with her fans of the show, the
countless autograph signings and meet and greets she was involved with, showed that
once again she was confident with herself and had a genuinely caring attitude
toward all her fans.
But her way of
life in 2013 has never made me more proud of her. She was enrolled in the cast
of the Last Song, in which was an amazing movie. It is actually one of my all time
favorite films. She then realized acting wasn’t her thing anymore and she began
to focus on her music career. She was living in Philadelphia for a few months
and her outlook on life changed forever. She said in a interview, “I just loved
how I was able to walk my dogs down the street, or even grab a coffee at the
local coffee shop without the paparazzi all over me like they would be in LA.”
This made me realize that she really is just a normal person, who although has
a lot of fame, cares about the little things in life that many people take for
granted. During her time on the east coast, she cut her beautiful brunette hair
off and decided to rock a short blonde look instead. This made a lot of people
mad because supposedly “she wasn’t pretty anymore” but to me this made her even
more beautiful. She knew this act would cause uproar but she showed her confidence
to world by stating, “I don’t care, I feel like myself more than ever before.”
Her short hair, acts of twerking in music videos and various live performances,
and lack of clothing she prevailed began to become the talk of the century. Opinions
started to arise everywhere, most of which were very negative. But then there
was me. I loved the new Miley, and not because she was doing “slutty or
inappropriate things”, cause I mean I don’t think I could pull of wearing
little to none on stage while licking a foam finger, but, I loved her because although
everyone was against her, she kept doing her thing and never gave up. I admire
those traits more than anything.
She is still the
fun loving Miley that she always was. She still has incredible talent
abilities. She still loves her fans more than anything. She is just showing her
art in a different way, and she needs to be respected. She was named one of the
most interesting people of the year, and I couldn’t agree more. Her confidence
and respect for herself will always be my favorite traits about her and I will
continue to be a devout fan to her. I can’t wait to go see Miley perform live
in Philadelphia this spring!
Tuesday, December 10, 2013
Tradition
Tradition is a very popular thing for most
people. It could be school, family or friend related. Whether it is something that
is original to everyone or is unique to your own life, it still has relevance and
if it is adamantly followed it will make its way down to future
generations. These traditions will
sometimes be lost along the way but as it’s passed down, it turns into a story,
and story is what drives our human minds. Whether the story is fiction or nonfiction
we are prone to intently listen and add in our own details as we repeat the
anecdote to someone else. For me tradition brings out many colorful and interesting
stories and will always hold a special spot in my heart.
Being the family oriented person that I am, when
I think of tradition my mind automatically wanders to great ones that are made
with the people I love the most. Around Christmas time each year, everyone in
my house is in a cheerful mood and we do many festive activities. My step mom
is a personal chef for a living, therefore each year she bakes the most
delicious cookies and each one of my siblings and I help her roll out the
cookie dough, or add in the last chocolate chip. Although this could be tiring
and messy at points, it is something that everyone can enjoy and the taste is
priceless.
Another Christmas time activity includes
our family trip to Philadelphia. We wake up bright and early, quickly get dressed
and make our way into the city. We first see the light display at the Macy’s
Department store, and then we walk around the beautifully decorated city and
stop at the Comcast Building. We see a 3-D show of a Christmas theme story and
ravish at all the amazing new scenes each year. Then we walk through the
Christmas village at Love Park, stopping at the stand to get some freshly made
peanuts. Finally, we walk to a nearby restaurant and end our day with a
marvelous dinner. Although it may seem repetitive at points, Philadelphia will always
be one of my favorite places to go in during Christmas time and each year I find
something new that sparks my interest that I didn’t pick up the year before.
These
are just a few traditions that occur during the holidays in my family, and they
are ones that I wouldn’t trade for the world. Everyone says that December is
the most wonderful time of the year, and for me that is 100% true, but not for
the amount of presents we get, but for the valuable time I spend with the most
important people in my life. I love telling people about these traditions and
feel emotions of excitement and comfort when the words spill out of my mouth.
Story is an intriguing part of most people’s lives, and tradition is one of my
favorite branches of it. I hope I can continue to tell these stories of valuable
traditions to my children and grandchildren and they follow the same ones and
add in their own twist as well.
Wednesday, November 27, 2013
The Effect of Sayings
Think about your favorite movie. Do you like it because of
the characters? Do you like the setting? Or is it just everything about it that
sparks your attention? Well most of the time, in my opinion, what catches
peoples eye or ears is the small sayings that are proposed throughout each
film. They usually have a comical purpose, but sometimes could be used for
other ideals.
Some sayings or
phrases are what make the movie so popular. Take for instance, Mean Girls directed
by Mike Waters. This is a movie about a girl from Africa, Kady Heron (Lindsay Lohan),
who transfers to a school in the United States and she has to go through the
struggles of the “new kid”, trying to find where she belongs. As with every
high school, there are the Jocks, the nerds, the “Emo” kids and everyone in
between. This may have a typical story line, but the character’s lines couldn’t
be more comical. The popular girls say a boy named Damien “is to gay to
function” or the dumb blonde Karen questions Kady’s nationality and says “if
you’re from Africa, why are you white.” Or when they are having a retreat in
the gymnasium, a random girl blurts out “I just wished we lived in a world of
rainbows and unicorns.” These all may seem irrelevant, or seem to be nonsense,
but you can’t think about this movie without referring back to these sayings. This
movie has turned into a “must see” just from these small phrases.
Elf, a popular
movie among the holidays, is also famous for its sayings throughout the film. This
is about an elf that works in Santa’s workshop, but isn’t your typical average
helper. He is abnormally tall and has trouble doing things that come so natural
to typical elves. He is eventually sent to the North Pole to find out who he
truly is. Some of the most comical parts of this movie include “We elves try to stick to the four main food groups:
candy, candy canes, candy corns and syrup.” When they are talking about the diets
of their daily lives. Or “ You sit on a throne of lies!” also “I'm a cotton-headed ninny-muggins.”This refers to all
the people he comes into contact with in the real world. Finally the most famous line of the whole
movie, “You stink. You smell like beef and cheese! You don't smell like Santa.”
This comes about as he comes in contact with “Santa” at the local mall. All of
these small phrases may also seem dumb, but they interestingly enough make the
whole movie. This has become one of the most watched Christmas movies of
all time, and will continue into the following generations.
Mean
Girls and Elf are just a few of the many movies that are filled with various sayings
that have everyone locked for the rest of their lives. Next time you sit down
to watch a movie, really take into consideration all the funny or quirky
sayings that not only stick into your head, but also give the movie an even
better effect. You not only realize that these phrases are used throughout the
film but also out of everyone else’s mouths around you as well. It’s amazing
what the directors of each movie know what will catch their audience’s
attention for the rest of their lives.
Sunday, November 10, 2013
The Influence of AP English
I have to say, Sterling High School has a
lot of great teachers. They really care about your education and do what they
can to better your path for a more successful life for when you graduate. Going
along with the teachers, they are great at the subjects they pursue as well. I
personally believe that taking AP English has allowed me to expand my horizons
and allow myself to be an advanced student, rather than just your typical high
school student.
In
junior year AP English, we focused a lot on our writing skills. Mrs. Hewsen
taught us how to add just the right amount of detail into our writing without
being too “flowery” or too “shallow”. She also taught us about the various literary
elements as in rhetoric, paradox, anecdote, similes, metaphors etc. We were not
taught the definitions but also taught how to add them into our writing,
allowing for all of us to seem like very scholarly individuals. Although, many
complained about the repetitive essays we had to write every day on numerous
topics, in the end they were a blessing in disguise. They gave a big advantage
to me and from talking to others, they felt the same. We were able to go in to
the AP test and feel confident with each word that we wrote down on the paper.
Another effective part of AP English 3 included the amount of partner interaction
within the classroom. We read a lot of short stories and not only did Mrs.
Hewsen read them to us, we read them aloud to each other and explained our interpretations
of them, seeing any similarities or differences. This allowed us to become open
minded and see different points of views without always arguing against it. It
was also helpful to role play certain stories like Macbeth. We would put
costumes including holding swords, crowns, and capes. This made it seem
realistic and more interesting than just reading it from the text book. Ms. Hewsen’s
love for teaching English and helping her students really allowed me to enjoy English
and perform better on my AP test than I ever thought I could.
Now as I am enrolled in senior year English,
my perspective has continued to grow as English continues to become my favorite
subject. This course focuses on more stories. I am an avid reader, but I usually
pursue romantic types like Nicholas Sparks, but obviously we aren’t going to
read that in class. We just recently finished The Odyssey and to my surprise it
was very interesting. Mr. Carty was able to read the epic with such an animated
tone, and explain with such detail that made it very entertaining and easy to
understand. He really focuses on our questions and how to make us better
listeners and how to focus on the important details of the book. We are now
reading Dante’s Inferno and although it is a hard concept to grasp, we thoroughly
talk about the characters and the important details of the novel. Another
effective part of this year’s English, is the AP practice worksheets. I feel
that continuously looking at harder materials and trying to figure out an
answer higher level questions allow my brain to work harder and will be used to
this material by the time we take the AP test again. The conversations we
engage in, whether they are about the story we are reading or just about another
topic of English, really catch my attention and I really enjoy coming to the
class every day. Mr. Carty’s influential character and grasp of the stories and
language allow me to become a highly educated student and continue my progress
to do well on the AP test this year.
Saturday, October 26, 2013
Cyber Slang vs. Written Language
Technology makes the world go round. Individuals especially Americans are attached
to their Iphones, Ipads, laptops etc as if it was their child. These devices
carry everything from the next soccer game or birthday to pictures that could
last a life time. Cellular devices are most popular and are amongst the most familiar
way to communicate with someone without having to be face to face with them.
From the time we
are a child and through our teenage years we are taught how to write precisely
and show we are fluent with the language and syntax. Teachers work day in and
day out trying to perfect each child’s abilities with hopes that they will show
succession throughout their lives. Technology is getting in the way though. Millions
of text messages are sent each day and most people, especially teenagers can
type an abundance of words a minute without any real effort, but when it comes
down to writing a scholarly paper for a class or other activities, the process
is much more difficult and causes much stress.
Texting and
social media networks don’t require full sentences or correct grammar therefore
it is not applied. Most teenagers say “k” for okay or “gtg” for I have go. Or for an even bigger eye sore, sentences are
written as “where u at” or “im gonna be there soon” without any capital letters
or punctuation marks. This may be useful for small talk but in reality it is
not acceptable. This phenomenon of “cyber
slang” has swept the nation, and it has affected many people, including myself.
Your brain is habitually trained to shorten up words and sentences when
texting, tweeting , commenting etc and then you get your first term paper and
you feel as if you’re a young child again, confused on how to spell or write
words in a sentence. From personal experiences, not only does this cause a problem
for average students but for students in the advanced proficient classes as well.
Writing exemplar papers is supposed to show your progress and succession
throughout college, in order for you to earn your degree and live a successful life,
but if the cyber slang continues, we will have less educated people in the world, in which will result in a extravagant,
detrimental issue.
The only solution
is to stop using technology as much… but how is that possible when a new form
of technology used for communication is invented each and every day…Have you
fallen into the trap of the “cyber slang users”?
Tuesday, October 15, 2013
Nicholas Sparks
The most recent and popular films/ novels are
all based on similar aspects. One may be comprised with a girl who dies from
cancer, and through her last struggling months she falls in love with the bad
boy at school, or another may be a girl who is abused and runs away and
eventually ends up with the guy of her dreams. All of these scenarios fall
under the category of “chick flick”, in which has the intention to bring out the
“inner girl” in everyone including crying, laughing, gossiping and lots of junk
food. Whether someone is 14 or 46, these stories are being heard and bringing
in the fame and fortune. As there are many authors that have written “feminine”
books, Nicholas Sparks is among the best. He is mostly known for his works, The
Notebook, The Last Song, Dear John and A Walk to Remember. Every one of his
stories captivates your mind and heart, with each ending to allow feelings of
happiness for the characters and sadness as well because you feel as they have
become a part of you and will now disappear.
Although Nicholas Spark’s is always
put in the category of Romance, he believes his work should be defined with
much more. In a recent interview with Sparks he stated “It's the difference between Cinderella and Romeo and Juliet.
Cinderella is a classic - it's what the romance genre is: a fantasy, romantic
escape. That's not what I do. I do Romeo and Juliet. Love and romance are a
part of it, but so is the rest of the range of human emotion. And sadness is
part of that and can come in different forms.” He is trying to get his audience
to realize that yes; he writes about love and happiness but also wants his
audience to feel the other emotions that go along with loving someone. Not
everything will always be rainbows and butterflies in a relationship or companionship.
In correlation ”it is important to
understand the link between love and tragedy: all great love stories, by
definition, have to end in tragedy. The greater the love, the greater the
tragedy when one of them dies.” Sharing
this input on his writing shows that he is not just about coming up with showy,
fake stories with the fairytale ending. He writes stories based on scenarios
that are very frequent or possible to happen in our everyday lives, in which
leaves such a great affect on the audience.
As I mentioned his writing skills very specifically, his skills in
film making are a noticeable feature as well. When questioned about his books verse
his movies he replied “What a lot of people really don't know is
that in many ways the novels are just as powerful as the films. You can watch
The Notebook, and love The Notebook, and look at the book and think to
yourself, "I don't have to read that because I saw the film" or
"I already know the story, so the book won't move me the way it did"
- and yet it will. It's the same thing with The Last Song. I don't care if
you've seen the film, the book is worth reading. I made them purposefully
different.” By creating and adding different details in his books and movies,
he’s giving an interesting and impressive effect that most authors cannot
master. He wants the same message to be portrayed throughout each but doesn’t want
to keep his followers from sticking to one over the other. It may seem
stereotypical, but Nicholas really captures a girls mind and brings out every
emotion he can. I have read many of his works and will continue my journey as
he continues his writing career. I mean I have never met a girl who hasn’t dreamed
about being the girl in his novels, who are always being saved by the beautiful
guy, and steals the key to her heart.
Tuesday, October 1, 2013
The Following
What comes to mind when you think of a
show that is intense, suspenseful and also jaw dropping? Well for me, it is The
Following created by Kevin Williamson. It revolves around the main character,
Joe Carroll and his insane sense of living.
He is an English professor that is intrigued by the dark, mysterious,
scary works of poet Edgar Allen Poe. From
Poe’s poems, Carroll comes to the conclusion that a woman suffering and dying
is one of the most beautiful scenes and decides to kill them himself, becoming
a nationwide serial killer. The big catch though… He isn’t alone! Carroll comes into contact with other active
serial killers and trains them to be his “groupies”, in which they follow his
every command, continuing his plan to kill women. The FBI is heavily involved
in this case, especially Ryan Hardy (head agent) who risks everything he has to
keep Claire Matthews, Joe’s wife and also his
long lost lover, and her son Joey safe from the dangerous world they are
living in. Every scene is full of blood, gun shots, and cries for help from
innocent people in desperate measures. What would you do if this scenario was
occurring in your neighborhood?
The scene of criminals being
chased, and agents finding the evidence to figure out the case has always
sparked my interest, but The Following has brought out another level of interest.
It is the type of show that when it comes to a commercial break, your head is
spinning, begging for more. The most significant part about the show is the
continuous, twists and turns throughout every episode. You may think you have
gathered enough clues to figure out where Joe Carroll or his followers are but
then BAM! Something else comes in the way, leaving your mind in utter despair.
For Instance, in the season one finale Ryan Hardy had just returned to his
apartment in New York along with Claire Matthews feeling more at peace with the
situation, allowing the audience to catch a breather as well. Then all of a
sudden an attractive woman, one of Hardy’s other lovers, also a neighbor of
Hardy has mysteriously snuck into the apartment, stabbing Ryan and Claire in
the back. There is only one explanation for this… She is part of Carroll’s
clan, and could it be that she is jealous that Ryan has moved on to a bigger
and better life with another woman? You never know who or what Joe Carroll’s
next victim is and it won’t easily be identified. The character and plot development that
Williamson has created is one of a pure writing genius, and one other writer should look up
to. There are two rules when watching this show: Get your thinking caps on and
be prepared for the thrill of a life time!
Monday, September 16, 2013
The Help
The novel The Help, by Kathryn Stockett, which was also made into a motion picture, is one of the most inspiring books i have ever read. . The pages are filled with a whirlwind of emotions including, laughter, sympathy, sorrow and pride. The story is told through many peoples point of views. Minnie, is a plump, African American women with enough attitude and confidence that could blow you away. Abileen is also an African American women, but she is soft spoken and cares for all children as if they were her own. Finally, Skeeter is white woman, who isnt afraid to stand up for what she believes in and also has aspirations to be a writer. These three women and narrator's of the story should be considered "heros" or role models in everyone's eyes.
Stockett not only wrote a phenomonal story, but was able to portray her characters in a way that was impossible to forget. She wrote and added different anctedotes with relevant details to keep the reader wanting more. For example, Stockett wrote about Aibileen's relationship with Mae Mobley, the daughter of one of the familie's she was a maid for. Her love and compassion for her was heart wrenching and made me love that little girl as well. She also told about Minnie's hard marriage with her abusive husband and how she had to raise her own children in such an unstable environment. I couldnt help but want to give her everything she needed to get out. Finally, Skeeter was established as not the most attractive woman, but someone who didnt care what the social norm was, and would help someone in a heartbeat whether they were black or white. Most importantly, Skeeter was looked up as a great person in society in which is everything she deserved. These character's were brought to my attention as intriguing indivuduals with hearts of gold.
Stockett not only wrote a phenomonal story, but was able to portray her characters in a way that was impossible to forget. She wrote and added different anctedotes with relevant details to keep the reader wanting more. For example, Stockett wrote about Aibileen's relationship with Mae Mobley, the daughter of one of the familie's she was a maid for. Her love and compassion for her was heart wrenching and made me love that little girl as well. She also told about Minnie's hard marriage with her abusive husband and how she had to raise her own children in such an unstable environment. I couldnt help but want to give her everything she needed to get out. Finally, Skeeter was established as not the most attractive woman, but someone who didnt care what the social norm was, and would help someone in a heartbeat whether they were black or white. Most importantly, Skeeter was looked up as a great person in society in which is everything she deserved. These character's were brought to my attention as intriguing indivuduals with hearts of gold.
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